{"id":4703,"date":"2019-12-03T16:40:01","date_gmt":"2019-12-03T22:40:01","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/jessemoynihan.com\/?p=4703"},"modified":"2019-12-03T18:03:34","modified_gmt":"2019-12-04T00:03:34","slug":"smug-bros-thumbnail-1st-pass","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"http:\/\/jessemoynihan.com\/?p=4703","title":{"rendered":"Smug Bros Thumbnail 1st Pass"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>I finished a first pass of the storyboard yesterday. I&#8217;m posting 80% of it here. I am not happy with the intro so I left it out. So what you see here is the emergence of Jesus 2 coming to spread his immortal jizz on Earth which keeps everyone from dying.<\/p>\n<p>This first pass went pretty much according to my natural TV writing instincts. So when I finished it, I felt kind of unhappy about it. It felt like a pilot, and not like a self contained story. I was about to accept it for what it was but then I ran into an animator friend of mine at the coffee shop and we talked about it for a few minutes. In those minutes I realized I could tell this story almost completely visually, cutting out about 95% of the dialog. I would cut out the introduction and just drop the viewers straight into the conflict. I would juggle the scenes a bit more so it feels like everything is happening at once and then see if it can stand on its own, rather than as a teaser for a series.<\/p>\n<p>The only thing that would get fully sacrificed is probably the Peter Prison Meat scene, but I can save that for later if I end up turning this thing into an actual series.<\/p>\n<p>For the short I believe I will be changing the title to &#8220;Jesus 2&#8221; to get away from the premise of smuggling souls, which would require another 10 minutes probably to really elaborate on. Also this would skirt around the need for me to buy back the rights to Smuggle Brothers from Cartoon Network which would cost me something like $12,000 I think.<\/p>\n<p><img decoding=\"async\" loading=\"lazy\" class=\"aligncenter size-full wp-image-4704\" src=\"http:\/\/jessemoynihan.com\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/12\/IMG_6255-e1575412131381.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"620\" height=\"827\" \/> <img decoding=\"async\" loading=\"lazy\" class=\"aligncenter size-full wp-image-4705\" src=\"http:\/\/jessemoynihan.com\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/12\/IMG_6256-e1575412116862.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"620\" height=\"827\" \/> <img decoding=\"async\" loading=\"lazy\" class=\"aligncenter size-full wp-image-4706\" src=\"http:\/\/jessemoynihan.com\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/12\/IMG_6257-e1575412102748.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"620\" height=\"827\" \/><\/p>\n<p>I was trying to do some kind of Independence Day around the world kinda thing here. <img decoding=\"async\" loading=\"lazy\" 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src=\"http:\/\/jessemoynihan.com\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/12\/IMG_6262-e1575412024846.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"620\" height=\"827\" \/> <img decoding=\"async\" loading=\"lazy\" class=\"aligncenter size-full wp-image-4712\" src=\"http:\/\/jessemoynihan.com\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/12\/IMG_6263-e1575412010352.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"620\" height=\"827\" \/> <img decoding=\"async\" loading=\"lazy\" class=\"aligncenter size-full wp-image-4713\" src=\"http:\/\/jessemoynihan.com\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/12\/IMG_6264-e1575411991828.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"620\" height=\"827\" \/> <img decoding=\"async\" loading=\"lazy\" class=\"aligncenter size-full wp-image-4714\" src=\"http:\/\/jessemoynihan.com\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/12\/IMG_6265-e1575411975876.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"620\" height=\"827\" \/> <img decoding=\"async\" loading=\"lazy\" class=\"aligncenter size-full wp-image-4715\" src=\"http:\/\/jessemoynihan.com\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/12\/IMG_6266-e1575411956976.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"620\" height=\"827\" \/> <img decoding=\"async\" loading=\"lazy\" class=\"aligncenter size-full wp-image-4716\" src=\"http:\/\/jessemoynihan.com\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/12\/IMG_6267-e1575411942422.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"620\" height=\"827\" \/> <img decoding=\"async\" loading=\"lazy\" class=\"aligncenter size-full wp-image-4717\" src=\"http:\/\/jessemoynihan.com\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/12\/IMG_6268-e1575411927104.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"620\" height=\"827\" \/> <img decoding=\"async\" loading=\"lazy\" class=\"aligncenter size-full wp-image-4718\" src=\"http:\/\/jessemoynihan.com\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/12\/IMG_6269-e1575411912274.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"620\" height=\"827\" \/> <img decoding=\"async\" loading=\"lazy\" class=\"aligncenter size-full wp-image-4719\" 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src=\"http:\/\/jessemoynihan.com\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/12\/IMG_6286-e1575411644471.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"620\" height=\"827\" \/> <img decoding=\"async\" loading=\"lazy\" class=\"aligncenter size-full wp-image-4736\" src=\"http:\/\/jessemoynihan.com\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/12\/IMG_6287-e1575411626470.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"620\" height=\"827\" \/> <img decoding=\"async\" loading=\"lazy\" class=\"aligncenter size-full wp-image-4737\" src=\"http:\/\/jessemoynihan.com\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/12\/IMG_6288-e1575411611422.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"620\" height=\"827\" \/> <img decoding=\"async\" loading=\"lazy\" class=\"aligncenter size-full wp-image-4738\" src=\"http:\/\/jessemoynihan.com\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/12\/IMG_6289-e1575411583336.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"620\" height=\"827\" \/> <img decoding=\"async\" loading=\"lazy\" class=\"aligncenter size-full wp-image-4739\" src=\"http:\/\/jessemoynihan.com\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/12\/IMG_6290-e1575411569722.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"620\" height=\"827\" \/> <img decoding=\"async\" loading=\"lazy\" class=\"aligncenter size-full wp-image-4740\" src=\"http:\/\/jessemoynihan.com\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/12\/IMG_6291-e1575411552383.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"620\" height=\"827\" \/> <img decoding=\"async\" loading=\"lazy\" class=\"aligncenter size-full wp-image-4741\" src=\"http:\/\/jessemoynihan.com\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/12\/IMG_6292-e1575411538415.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"620\" height=\"827\" \/> <img decoding=\"async\" loading=\"lazy\" class=\"aligncenter size-full wp-image-4742\" src=\"http:\/\/jessemoynihan.com\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/12\/IMG_6293-e1575411516434.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"620\" height=\"827\" \/> <img decoding=\"async\" loading=\"lazy\" class=\"aligncenter size-full wp-image-4743\" src=\"http:\/\/jessemoynihan.com\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/12\/IMG_6294-e1575411499305.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"620\" height=\"827\" \/> <img decoding=\"async\" loading=\"lazy\" class=\"aligncenter size-full wp-image-4744\" src=\"http:\/\/jessemoynihan.com\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/12\/IMG_6295-e1575411479389.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"620\" height=\"827\" \/><\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>I finished a first pass of the storyboard yesterday. I&#8217;m posting 80% of it here. I am not happy with the intro so I left it out. So what you see here is the emergence of Jesus 2 coming to spread his immortal jizz on Earth which keeps everyone from dying. This first pass went [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":2,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":[],"categories":[14],"tags":[],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"http:\/\/jessemoynihan.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/4703"}],"collection":[{"href":"http:\/\/jessemoynihan.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"http:\/\/jessemoynihan.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/jessemoynihan.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/users\/2"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/jessemoynihan.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcomments&post=4703"}],"version-history":[{"count":3,"href":"http:\/\/jessemoynihan.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/4703\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":4747,"href":"http:\/\/jessemoynihan.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/4703\/revisions\/4747"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"http:\/\/jessemoynihan.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fmedia&parent=4703"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/jessemoynihan.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcategories&post=4703"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/jessemoynihan.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Ftags&post=4703"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}